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In this project, it is proposed a reliable analytical method for the determination of XXXXX in YYYYYY. \u00a0ZZZZZZ will be synthesized and used for the determination of XXXXX in YYYYY by using ultra high-performance liquid chromatography coupled to tandem mass spectroscopy.<\/p>\n
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By using active voice instead of passive voice and by substituting nouns for verbs (thus avoiding nominalization), we have a more lively text:<\/p>\n
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